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Purple and black flesh
Surrounded by milky white skin.
What did I do to deserve this?
Where do I begin?

I forgot to do my homework.
I made a B plus on my test.
And when I got home from school
I laid down for a rest.

Now my skin is slick with blood,
My shirt and jeans are soaked.
My eyes are cold and lifeless,
He says I'm nothing but a joke.

He hit me with the buckle
Of his long black leather belt.
And after the first two blows,
Nothing is all I felt.

He hit and yelled and screamed at me,
He did his very best.
But I know I've finally earned
My long and overdue rest.
©2005-2009 ~DanteLiamRoka
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I don't know where this came from...Just sorta spilled out...

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:iconlinkinparkmat:
Seriously... I had chills reading those last two parts =O

A must :+fav:

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:icondanteliamroka:
Thanks! :D Don't know why I wrote it, but still...I liked the way it finally turned out!

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Ta Ma Duh!!

Marcus: "There's a cow in the backyard."
David: "I know."
Marcus: (Pause) "Is it dinner?"

Meat Shields and Pheonix Downs.
:iconlinkinparkmat:
np!

Its really strong... Its like I can relate to it without even have been near experiencing it!

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:icondanteliamroka:
Lol thats a good thing...

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Ta Ma Duh!!

Marcus: "There's a cow in the backyard."
David: "I know."
Marcus: (Pause) "Is it dinner?"

Meat Shields and Pheonix Downs.
:iconlinkinparkmat:
>_> Oh yeah =P

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:icongo4baroque:
woah....this is really amazing...very hardcore......and deep.....*star +* hehe

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Shut your fucking face, uncle fucker. You're a cock sucking, ass licking, uncle fucker. You fuck uncles, yes it's true. No one fucks uncles quite like you.
:icondanteliamroka:
Thanks!! :D

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Ta Ma Duh!!

Marcus: "There's a cow in the backyard."
David: "I know."
Marcus: (Pause) "Is it dinner?"

Meat Shields and Pheonix Downs.
:iconwire-master:
Very good work... :+fav:
The sad thing is it made me think of a fanfic charrie I'm working with...:sadangel:

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Please check out my :gallery: and comment! Thanks! ---> Clicky! =^_^=
:icondanteliamroka:
Thanks for the fav! It was my first attempt at something in the horror/macabre section. I didn't think it was any good lol!

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Ta Ma Duh!!

Marcus: "There's a cow in the backyard."
David: "I know."
Marcus: (Pause) "Is it dinner?"

Meat Shields and Pheonix Downs.

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